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Wednesday, February 15, 2006

touch me not

I slowly open up myself,
hoping to find a beautiful world out there.
The warm morning sun, the fresh air, the smell of spring.
Along came a foot that strikes agony deep inside me.
The pain reverberates throughout my body.
My nerve, my vein, my heart.
I close my heart,
lock myself from the outside world,
not wanting to be hurt again.
Not again.
Touch me not.



8 Comments:

  • this poem you compose yourself or wad??

    By Blogger DJ Niwde, at 2/15/2006 07:44:00 PM  

  • it doesn't even look like a poem.

    just craps and babbling

    By Blogger chillycraps, at 2/16/2006 07:30:00 AM  

  • u r not the only one.
    Ok, I hurt you, so?! You think I not hurt is it?! You think because I'm not as hurt as you at this moment I wasn't hurt previously?

    Stop pitying yourself and buck up! Be more confident can! What lock yourself up! Smack you ah! Is not you cannot buck up, is you don't want to buck up.
    Don't say it doesn't work that way ok! If you don't help yourself, nobody can. An outsider can build up your confidence, then crush it again. Only you can maintain it.

    Strike one doesn't mean you are out.

    By Blogger tstar, at 2/16/2006 08:25:00 PM  

  • tstar, +1!!!

    Dude, stop thinking that you are CMI/sotong one!
    It like hard skin man, first time it is really bad (blisters and shit), if you stop climbing at that point you will have that shit each next time you climb. But if you still climb then you get hard skin and then you won't pay attention to wall being rough, etc. Not sure if that was a good example.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 2/16/2006 10:50:00 PM  

  • hmm.. i dunno the full situation.. but well.. i guess.. seriously.. after knowing you for so long ah.. (about two years plus already..)

    u've gotta have some self confidence leh.. seriously.. keep you head high.. come on.. it takes courage for me to step up in stage to host a show.. same thing applies to you.. stand and.. brace yourself and you will achieve wad u want to achieve.. believe in yourself and you can make it..

    By Blogger DJ Niwde, at 2/16/2006 11:16:00 PM  

  • haha... one talking about climbing and one talking about hosting shows!

    Hey dude, take it easy and time will eventually make things better. (Cliche, but if you think about it, has some truth)

    I love the serenity Prayer... :)

    God, Grant me to courage to change the things I can, the ability to accept the things I can't, and the wisdom to know the difference.

    I pray that for you right now.

    By Blogger Alex Wong, at 2/17/2006 08:51:00 AM  

  • Amen.

    By Blogger chillycraps, at 2/17/2006 09:59:00 AM  

  • can I put a stop to this?

    although I really have something to say and I'm not happy with things, but to say more would have hurt her. I'm tired of all this exchange of words via blog.

    what has all these got to do with mimosa?

    By Blogger chillycraps, at 2/17/2006 12:17:00 PM  

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